Friday, December 5, 2008
What could possibly be my final blog post
Now that the semester is coming to a close, and with exams approaching quickly, I am going to try to spend some of my time studying this weekend as well as putting the final touches on my portfolio. This weekend will also involve some fun things such as the showing of Step Brothers at Squires for only 2 BUCKS! Saturday is the swim team dinner and Christmas party. The freshmen class is going to a Japanese steakhouse together and I am excited for fried rice and steak! Only 13 days until I go home again!
Wednesday, November 19, 2008
I'M OUTTA HERE!!
I really enjoyed everyone's presentation today.
I am now leaving for an invitational in Knoxville versus the University of Tennessee and the University of Kentucky. We are coming back at 2 am Sunday and then I have to stay in Blacksburg until Tuesday morning after practice : ( But then, HOME FOR THANKSGIVING!!!!!!!
Friday, November 14, 2008
Group Feedback
Our group worked well at making sure that we gave both suggestions and praises in a pretty proportional way. The praises and suggestions, I thought, were really helpful.
I'm so glad that today is Friday and it is finally the weekend! Next week I am leaving Wednesday for a swim invitational in Knoxville, Tennessee, so it is going to be a short week. I'm glad I will have a short week, but this also means that I have a lot to get done before I leave. Most of this work will have to be done this weekend, but hopefully I will have time to do some other fun things. Tonight I'm planning on going to the basketball game and the rest of the weekend is a mystery.
Tuesday, November 11, 2008
Flyers
1. Keep it brief- only include the basic information
2. Use graphics- only graphics directly related to the topic at hand
3. Coloring- remind yourself what the flyer is being used for
4. Cluter- don't let pictures overwhelm the print message or vice versa
5. Size- make the most important thing the biggest and everything else smaller
The sources (eHow.com and catalogs.com) noth brought up good points to consider such as don't make your Christmas poster the same "holiday red" that everyone else will because you want yours to stand out. Also, you may think your flyer is informative, but its always good to have a second or third opinion. Ask someone to take a quick glance at your flyer and ask them what message they got from it and whether or not it was convincing.
Flyers are used by anyone who wants to get information out to many people in a quick and hassel free way. Professionals promoting their businesses as well as girl scouts promoting their bake sales can use flyers. Flyers allow much freedom and creativity, but you must use conservation.
Thursday, November 6, 2008
Initiating Action..or lack there of
He said that Northstar has helped out with patients at Fairview Homes where people with mental and physical illnesses live (similar to a nursing home) and have redone the rooms there. Northstar has also made an impact on the homeless in Blacksburg by helping out, in particular, with two families by helped them get back on their feet by giving them work in the church office such as painting, or giving them rides whenever they need it. One of the father's in one of the families has attended the Northstar service the past 3 Sundays which is also really interesting. Finally Cody told me in December Northstar will be having church at the Lyric in downtown Blacksburg. It will be a Christmas celebration that the entire community will be invited to and there will be Christmas themed events such as Santa Clause being there.
To me this seems like Northstar already has reached out to the community in multiple ways so I still am unsure of what topic to do my assignment on.
I replied to Cody in a final effort to find something that needs improvement that hasn't already been acted upon, but until then I would like to build off of what Northstar has already planned.
Since Northstar is organizing the Christmas service/celebration and inviting the entire community to the Lyric, I think it would be appropriate to make flyers. I would find out more details about the event and let students on campus be aware of the event. It will be easy for students to attend because it is downtown and not off campus at Blacksburg Middle School (like a normal Sunday service). This is still tentative, but when more information comes I will post it to my blog.
Essay Feedback, Initiating Action, and Gamedays
For my initiating action assignment, I am still waiting on Cody (the worship leader) to get back to me about what he thinks could improve and how it could be initiated at Northstar or within the religious community. If he still thinks it is an issue like before, I am highly considering initiating other ways to reach out the community and get them involved.
The next few days are pretty big for me. Today is GAMEDAY and I’m really pumped to hopefully kill Maryland. First I have to get through my Chemistry test though : ( Saturday we have a meet against Clemson which is gonna be huge. We beat them last year at ACC’s but it was close and they have a really strong team. My mom is coming to watch so I will spend Saturday and Sunday with her.
Counting down the days until THANKSGIVING!
Friday, October 31, 2008
Problems In Communities
Now what I need to do is relate this exercise to my own community and decide what I would I think needs to change within my community and how I would go about making these changes.
This weekend I will be celebrating Halloween, and spending time creating a prototype for my engineering sustainability project.
Tuesday, October 28, 2008
This Weeks Current Outlook
Tomorrow after class I leave for Charlottesville for a swim meet against UVA. Although I'm excited that I get to travel with the team (not everyone is getting to go) I'm stressed because I have an engineering test Thursday that counts for a large portion of my grade. I also have a Calculus test Friday. I'm just trying to get through the rest of the week and then it’s Halloween and I'm going to dress up as Tinkerbell!
Feedback from a Classmate
Ben thought that my paragraphs on the food and music were good because a college aged student would be interested in these aspects of the church and service. As far as breaking down lyrics from worship songs, he said it was not necessary.
I need to talk more about the main message and describe the worship session on a more personal level.
Finally, it may be beneficial to omit the paragraphs on weekly announcements and offering because they aren't supportive to the purpose.
Tuesday, October 21, 2008
More on... "What makes a good essay?"
In order to make my essay a good essay I need to do a number of things. First I need to make sure that I have a clear and defined purpose and audience. This will help me snag the readers interest and take them along and make them feel a part of the essay as if they were actually experiencing it. One of the qualities listed above that contributes to a good essay is meeting literary demands such as metaphors and descriptions. I do think that my draft has a lot of great description in it. I think description is great, but I also need to make sure that the description is focused and enhancing the writing by adding substance, not just length. The descriptions need to be telling about different things through the essay or describing the same thing in many different, creative ways. If it is too repetitious it is overkill and only takes away from the quality. Finally my essay needs more structure and sentence variety, but this can be easily fixed when moving on to the “up draft”.
Friday, October 17, 2008
Group Discussion and Week Summary
As far as the week that is almost nearly behind me, I got a chemistry test out of the way (although it wasn't the greatest experience). I am looking forward to the weekend. Tonight I plan to attend the women's volleyball game and cheer on my fellow Hokies. The rest of the weekend will hopfully go to getting ahead in class and relaxing. I sure hope the weather clears up. Rain tends to keep me locked in the dorm room : (
Tuesday, October 14, 2008
Essay Feedback
I don’t want to completely get rid of the justification section so I am going to use this information for the upcoming essay, or I am going to have to demonstrate more specifically how my site visit/interview shows a connection between advanced technology and contemporary music on number of new members.
The other corrections seem to be somewhat simple and easy to fix. Right now I’m just stumped and still uncertain as to which way I should go next.
Sunday, October 12, 2008
"Essays"
The well renowned Gay Telese captures the disposition and relationship between each of the characters in Ali in Havana. Talese describes Stevenson, the local three time Olympic gold medalist, as “a proud man who exhibits all of his height (with a) firm jaw and his oval shaped head locked at a right angle to his straight spined back.” She tells that Stevenson and Ali have a distinct relationship although they do not speak the same language or even communicate much at all. They are “brotherly in their body language”. When approached by Castro, Ali’s hesitation is portrayed through the sentence “His expression remains characteristically fixed and benign, and his eyes do not blink despite the flashbulbs of several surrounding photographers.” The closeness of Ali and his wife is represented when Yolanda begins to “caress (Ali’s) left wrist, on which is a silver Swiss Army watch she bought him…the only jewelry (he) wears.”
Although I did have some trouble retrieving the entire excerpt of Silent Dancing, I was drawn to the distinction between the view of Cofer’s mother and father of living in El Building in New Jersey. Her father had ordered Judith and her family to keep to themselves and not talk to any of the other families living above or below them. These orders were put into place so that the family wouldn’t develop any bonds, making it easier to leave the barrio (neighborhood). To her mother, the building was “comfort”. She enjoyed the familiar language-Spanish, familiar smells-red kidney beans, and familiar music- Salsas. For some reason I thought it was ironic that what driving one parents to leave the area and move away was the comfort of the other.
Sunday, October 5, 2008
Workshop and Revising
On another note-
LETS GO STEELERS!! BEAT THOSE JAGS!!
And yet another note-
This weekend was pretty busy. The swim team hosted seniors in high school who we are recruiting to swim at VT next year. They come from states all over such as Pennsylvania, South Carolina, and Florida. We showed them around campus, took them to the football game, and let them get to know the team. For this reason Sunday is now dedicated to homework, and I must get back to list of things to do.
Revising
What works? I think the strength of my draft is using factual information such as statistics as well as opinions such as direct quotes. I can build on this strength by making sure that the quantitative and qualitative information that I use is stated in a way that adds to the paper and doesn’t take away from the paper (if a bunch of confusing numbers were listed that weren’t supportive, or a quote was very wordy and unclear).
What else might be said? I am still deciding whether there is a need to add an abstract since my actual proposal is towards the end of the paper, or if the background information is enough said. I am also considering adding a cost section. Although my proposal does not ask for a certain amount of funding it does ask for specific equipment and I may need to research into how much this equipment actually costs.
What’s next? Since the work is a research proposal the next step would be the actual research. Hopefully the proposal will be very clear, but will still leave the reader thinking about other possible opinions or options of research related to the topic at hand.
Tuesday, September 30, 2008
Good and Bad
Sunday, September 28, 2008
Literature Review
Although the denomination is the one of the largest, the Southern Baptist Convention (SBC) has reported that the baptism rate is on the decline. Baptism-“a key measure of vitality and evangelism”-has declined 5% from 2006 and is currently at 345,941 baptisms per year. The SBC also disclosed that the membership numbers dropped by 40,000 from 2006 to 2007. The promising statistic is that attendance has increased slightly and the number of congregations has grown by 1%.
A study at Case Western Reserve University examined the beliefs about God and forgiveness in a Baptist congregation and attempted to identify core beliefs about God and forgiveness. The results showed that core beliefs included that “God commands us to forgive others”, “God wants us to love our enemies”, “I believe that God has forgiven me of all my sins”, “God has forgiven me for some pretty big things”, and “God is both merciful and just”. This study, although preformed on a limited sample of members of a specific Baptist church and convenient college students, represents the fact that the majority of conservative Christians believe that God is merciful and just, that Christians are morally obligated to forgive others (it is a Divine mandate), as well as the fact that God’s forgiveness is necessary but certainly attainable.
A large piece of what Northstar represents is contemporary and creative worship. Pastor Gordon Atkinson states that “Preaching is such an esoteric art form. It requires creativity but only within very rigid rules.” Creative worship can involve using art, dance, contemporary music, digital projection, and other multi-sensory experiences. It is very easy however to add these forms of creativity and actually take away from the message. Worshipers must not lose sight of what worship is all about: identifying and rejoicing the presence of “God-with-us”. Benefits of creative worship include a picture to explain a point visually, reading the words of the songs from a projector instead of a hymnal, or using images to match the feeling of a song or scripture. Contemporary worship music is beneficial in that fact that although it is all themed by its content (Christian beliefs and lyrics) it is represented by many different genres including rock, country, gospel, and hip-hop.
Although the number of baptisms has fallen in the past year, Baptist churches still represent the values and beliefs they had aimed to represent. By emphasizing the fact that God merciful, just, and easily accessible by the means of creative and contemporary worship, the Baptist community can still reach out and touch the lives of many more people.
Bibliography:
Atkinson, G. (2008, June 3). Where do sermons go?. Christian Century, pp. 10,11. Retrieved September 24, 2008, from Religion and Philosophy Collection database.
Bott, R. (2007, November). Creative Worship. Clergy Journal, pp. 8,10. Retrieved September 24, 2008, from Academic Search Complete database.
Exline, J. (2008, Summer2008). Beliefs about God and Forgiveness in a Baptist Church Sample. (cover story). Journal of Psychology & Christianity, 27(2), 131-139. Retrieved September 24, 2008, from Religion and Philosophy Collection database.
Price, D. (2007, December 22). Compilation 'WOWs' Christian Music Fans. Billboard, 119(51), 74-74. Retrieved September 24, 2008, from Academic Search Complete database.
SBC reports baptism rate lowest in decade. (2008, June 3). Christian Century, Retrieved September 24, 2008, from Religion and Philosophy Collection database.
Thursday, September 18, 2008
Relief at Last
My interview took place this morning at Starbucks on Main Street. I interviewed Cody, the worship leader/youth and college leader, for Northstar. Since he is not too much older than me he was extremely easy to talk. He gave me a lot of useful information and insightful answers to the interview questions. Since I was relatively familiar with the current events of the church, it was really easy to bring up other topics as he answered questions. When I ran out of interview questions, we just started talking about life. This added a nice touch to the whole interview experience. As of now, I am not left with any questions unanswered, but if I think of anymore at a later time I know Cody will certainly be available for a follow up interview.
Thursday, September 11, 2008
Interview ?s
Is it okay if I record/quote you?
How long have you been involved at Northstar Church?
What is your role at Northstar?
Can you tell me about your involvement in the church?
What denomination is the church?
What, to you, makes Northstar unique?
Why did you choose to attend and/or serve at Northstar?
Do you feel a special connection to the church? How would you describe it?
What are your goals that you would like to accomplish at Northstar?
What makes Northstar a community?
Goal (noun): Result or achievement toward which effort is directed.
I have always been taught that writing is a process. I cannot honestly say that my own writing commonly goes through a process. I don't usually write a first draft, second draft, etc. I just write my paper, and read it over once checking for simple errors. I know this isn't doing my writing justice so I would like to learn to really edit my papers as well as edit them multiple times.
In previous research assignment I have relied on the internet as my main source of information, unless required otherwise. With so many resources available at the library at Tech, I would like to take advantage of the opportunity.
Sunday, September 7, 2008
Not As Exciting As A Tech Football Game But...
Directly across from me is a diver named Cara. Cara is five feet tall and I can only see her blue eyes, deep in concentration, from above the laptop. She is constantly combing her fingers through her blonde bangs and I notice her fluorescent pink nail polish chipping off of her finger nails. She occasionally rests her cheeks on both fists, causing her face to scrunch up looking stumped at the problem lying before her.
Haley, another swimmer, is sitting with her back towards me so that I can see her screen and her progress on her day’s agenda. Unlike Cara who sits rigidly in her chair, Haley sits comfortably, cross-legged in the chair with her ear buds in. She is looking up definitions on WikiAnswers and trying to write a paper, but not making much progress.
The nonchalant Alex doesn’t even bring her laptop with her for our two hour adventure. She only brings a book to read. While she reads, she props her feet up on the table. She is constantly checking the time on her cell phone which is always followed with the phrase, “Oh my God”, whispered under her breath.
Last Emily plays with her shiny pearl earrings while she stares in awe at the computer screen with her mouth wide open. Occasionally she takes a sip from the bottle of Aquafina water bottle sitting next to her laptop.
"Knowing" about my Community
After deciding to learn about the Northstar Church community, I realized that much of my research will relate to our findings. In the study of a religious community, I can assume that many believers in God are believers due to personal experiences with God as well as a relationship with a pastor, preacher, or worship leader who is experienced and knowledgeable. A possible "gray" area within a church or a religion could be the Bible. The Bible can be interpreted in multiple ways and can be relayed to a congregation in many different manners. Different followers have different religious paths, and the beauty of religion is that there is not one path that is truth or not true.
Thursday, September 4, 2008
Top 2 Communities
Wednesday, September 3, 2008
Communities I Belong To
religious community
steelers fans
people in a relationship
former bertucci's employees
english speaker
vt student
music lovers
engineers
freshmen